Cohesive Ties and Their Impact on Children's Story Comprehension

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Children’s Stories, Cohesive Ties, Narrative Coherence, Semantic Cohesion, Ellipsis

Abstract

This study examines the significance of cohesive ties in constructing children’s stories and their influence on children story comprehension. Simplicity is one of the essential conditions by which children’s stories are recognized.  This study aims to determine the occurrence frequency of cohesive ties in two children’s stories, illustrate the impact of their uses on the degree of clarity and ambiguity children’s stories and point out their influence on the children’s comprehension to such kind of genre. The stories employed are ‘Golden Windows’ and ‘The Pig Brother’ by Laura Richards. This study adopts both quantitative and qualitative approaches. It is quantitative as it finds out the frequency of the use of cohesive ties in the selected children’s stories. It is qualitative as it determines the influences of the use of cohesive ties on the construction of children’s stories, and on the process of conveying messages in such stories.  This study adopts Halliday and Hasan (1976) cohesion model for the recognition of cohesive ties. One of the significant concluding points this study has come up with is that the simplicity and the clarity of the children’s stories are mainly connected to the avoidance certain cohesive ties such as exophora, clausal substitution, verbal ellipsis and clausal ellipsis. 

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Author Biography

Bikhtiyar O. Fattah, Department of English Language, Faculty of Education, Koya University, Koya 44023, Kurdistan Region – F.R. Iraq

Bikhtiyar Omar Fattah is an assistant professor of Linguistics & English Language at the Department of English Language/ Faculty of Education/ Koya University.
He was born on September 1, 1981 in Koya / Erbil. He got B.A. degree at Sallahaddin University, and got M.A. at Koya University. He attended and participated in many national and international English language and English linguistic courses, conferences, workshops and training courses; namely at: Huddersfield University, Sheffield Hallam University, Loughborough University/ the United Kingdom; Virginia Tech / USA; and Bilkent University/ Turkey, in addition to the almost all university in the Iraqi Kurdistan Region.
His research interests focus on Sociolinguistics, Discourses Analysis, Politeness and Applied Linguistics. He is a member of the Politeness Research Group.  

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Published

2025-11-06

How to Cite

Fattah, B. O. (2025) “Cohesive Ties and Their Impact on Children’s Story Comprehension”, KOYA UNIVERSITY JOURNAL OF HUMANITIES AND SOCIAL SCIENCES, 8(2), pp. 555–564. Available at: https://jhss.koyauniversity.org/index.php/jhss/article/view/1556 (Accessed: 6 November 2025).

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